she didn’t know he could see her.
he was sure of this because she was so comfortable in her skin and because she wasn’t watching her moves. she wasn’t moving with that conscious awareness that women adopt when they’re being watched or when they’re out hunting.
she was easy and sensual.
she didn’t mind being watched either.
he was sure of this because she didn’t keep her curtains closed. and because sometimes it seemed almost like she was playing to an unseen audience. he particularly liked the way she glanced at the window as if to ask her audience what their next request was.
he was, however; amused to death by her clear assumption that no one could see her.
he had moved in to this condominium a few months ago and had wondered during inspection why such a wonderful window had full blinds on it. he had wondered further why there were so few lights in the room and why there was no furniture near the window.
then he had noticed the missing slats a few inches below his own eye level and had looked through.
at first all he could see was the building on the other side of the alley and it’s blank windows looking back on him. this was passing strange, why would anyone want to stare at a blank wall?
strange enough that after he moved in he decided to pass the window whenever he thought of it until he felt that he had seen all there was to see across the way. strange enough that he didn’t immediately change the setup of the room.
strange enough that he felt almost pulled to the window.
days passed like this, passed with him watching. he got to know most of his neighbours too, well enough that he wanted to greet them in the street but wasn’t sure how. eventually he grew to enjoy peeking out to see what the neighbourhood was doing without seeing him.
somehow, and later he wondered at this, he didn’t see the small window on the lowest level. it didn’t fit the building and somehow he didn’t really see it. perhaps because it was usually so dim.
tonight the lights were blazing and there was a woman doing.. what was she doing? he peered closer because he could see that she was tall and fit and built like an amazon.
she was… cleaning? but he had never seen cleaning like this. he’d HEARD about it in those letters that people apparently wrote to those magazines but he’d always thought it was some adolescent male fantasy.
she was cleaning all right, cleaning in hot pink underwear and a shirt so tiny that he was pretty sure if he watched long enough he’d see her nipples. the kind of shirt that rode up and exposed the rarely seen bottoms of her breasts.
the kind of shirt that men ached to remove with their teeth.
the kind of shirt that women hated because it wasn’t ‘flattering’ … the kind they cleaned in.
he lost track of how long he stood there watching her work. bending and straightening and occasionally stopping to shimmy to the music, unfettered breasts bouncing beneath her shirt, his cock slowly working it’s way toward his belly button.
his left hand, of it’s own volition, worked it’s way down to gently rub the front of his pants, his member responding with alacrity. it liked her it did.
she worked that way for some time, and finally he watched her sweep up and then cross the room with a towel.
was she going to shower?? oh lord please please please!
he waited there, breath caught in his throat and wondered at himself. fully grown man with a life and a job and a wonderful woman and here he was acting like a boy in the locker room.
but oh that body, and the way she moved!
he stared into her apartment and wondered at himself, he’d always thought such behavior the height of declasse and yet he wasn’t moving away. he had just about convinced himself that he would rearrange the room and change the offending blind when she returned across the room.
he groaned and released himself in one swift tear of buttons. button flys were a gift from the universe! he sprang free, already fully erect and glistening with precum as he watched her and began touching himself.
she must know she had an audience! i mean standing there, towel on her head, with her fingers at her lips looking pensive while water glistened on her bare and steamy skin and her nipples swayed gently with each breath? was that even fair?
absently she reached town and started playing idly with one of her glistening pink nipples.
his gaze burned her and he couldn’t believe she didn’t know he was there. she must. groaning he licked his own hand and began to stroke himself in earnest now.
faster and faster he pumped as she began to move around her home again… clearly noticing things she had missed and giving her place a good finishing touch.
seeing her muscles play and her body move languidly as her breasts bounced and she alternately revealed and hid her well trimmed bush was killing him.
he began to pant and groan slightly as he felt his balls tightening and his anus squeezing. he licked his other hand and began working himself hard now, hand pistoning up and down on his gleaming shaft as he soaked his free hand and then switched, wetter and wetter… faster and faster he pumped as she worked.
finally, with her back to him she began to rearrange the couch cover and cushions. he couldn’t bear it, her pussy peeking from the top of her thighs whenever she bent over far enough and her spectacular ass working the rest of the time.
he felt his body tighten and gather as a wave of release approached his desperately throbbing cock. the cock that only wanted to be inside that pussy that was so close and so unattainable. his hips thrust as he imagined slamming himself into her again and again while she braced her hands on the back of the couch.
he would reach around of course and tease her clit mercilessly as he slammed his shaft into her up to it’s limit. he would wrap one arm across her hips and hold her there while he fucked her and fucked her and fucked her until they both screamed and then as she came at the top of her lungs he would pull out and in one long spurt he would spray her beautiful ass and back with his come.
his hips jerked and twitched and his balls got tighter and tighter until with a long cry he shot and shot all over his hand and his own chest.
he had installed a small video camera with a telephoto lens and a very large harddrive the next day.
…
[i'm not a boy, feel free to tell me what coming feels like from the inside or if anything he does is totally not boylike okay boys?]


October 10, 2006 at 9:00 am
Nope, I think you got it pretty good. Very very erotic thoughts right now!
October 10, 2006 at 3:27 pm
Cool story there BiG
reckon you’re close on the mark there!
Guessing its the exhibitionist in you thats doing the cleaning and would love to be on the other side of those blinds watchin ya! *g*
keep ‘em cummin gorgeous
October 10, 2006 at 4:44 pm
sc: excellent. see i don’t actually know what it feels like to cum when you’re a guy. i know what it feels like when you’re a girl.
like… do your toes curl?
do your balls tighten before you spurt?
what does your tummy and your ass do?
these and other questions brought to you by my newfound love of writing smut. and boy smut bloggers just say stuff like ‘can’t hold back’ but don’t describe the physical sensations.
glad you like.
asterix: thanks!
hope so… i’d love it if a man just did a blow by blow *hee* of the physical sensations involved in an orgasm… and what it feels like to ride the edge of one.
yup, it sure is, i love me some half naked cleaning! and i love even more the idea of someone watching me and not knowing…
will do darlin’
October 10, 2006 at 5:59 pm
I guess it depends on how good it is..not sure about toes curling, or really being concious of anything in particular..if it’s good that is!
You must have felt what the cock feels like as it cums though, it gorws fatter, and pulses as each spurt flows into your dripping cunt.
October 10, 2006 at 7:42 pm
Ohhhh that was HOT, bad influence girl !
I hope that’s what my cop is feeling when he’s watching me with binoculars from a few streets away !!!
Happy Tuesday !
Sincerely,
Anne Elizabeth
October 10, 2006 at 10:37 pm
sc: really huh? i feel it first in my toes… there’s a little thing that happens there.
i’ve felt penises ejaculate of course, in my hand and my mouth but it’s been a while and i’m not inside the guy having the moment right? i’m just the one catching.
anne: i have this urge to nickname you liza.
thank you! i’m still hot from writing it and i’ve been eyeing my window suggestively all day.
your cop watches you? ohhhhh *pant*
yes it is!
October 11, 2006 at 12:34 am
You know, I wish I could be a guy for a few hours – just to know what it feels like to slide into someplace warm and wet and cum…
October 11, 2006 at 12:57 am
i figure a month is about perfect because really, for the first week all you would want to do is stay home and wank… and then there’s learning to fuck with a nut instead of a bolt and all… so a month.
but then i want to be a girl again… :)
and shit, just the way you said that has me all damm, i’m feeling my pulse against my chair!
October 11, 2006 at 1:40 am
Nicely written and erotic.
Hmmmm, can I say that I’ve never viewed a hot neigbor? Say a hot 18 year old cheerleader with a penchant for lounging by her pool in a bikini. No, I could not say that. No camera though. Can I say I never thought of it? No, I could not say that….
October 12, 2006 at 2:55 am
heh
well the camera would be kind of rude in real life wouldn’t it?
also your wife would see those and that would suck!
hmmm… cheerleaders and swimming pools…
October 14, 2006 at 12:55 am
I’m going to go and have a cold shower, and return for the next instalment. You don’t have to be a guy, are u sure you’re not? (joke!). I really liked the tightening at the end of his experience.
:)
October 14, 2006 at 2:42 am
ana i’m pretty sure… but i’ve always been good at putting myself in other people’s shoes…
i think that’s actually my greatest talent…
:)
yay for cold showers but hot ones with waterproof vibrators are better! ;>